99 Word Prompt

Do you like challenges? Fancy testing your writing discipline? Then why not have a go at this :https://carrotranch.com/2018/07/12/july-12-flash-fiction-challenge

July 12, 2018, prompt: In  exactly 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a broken fence. You can mend it, leave it, or explain its place in a story. Go where the prompt leads.

“Hello. Miss, can you hear me?

“Who are you? What happened?”

“I think you fainted love”

“Oh. Yes. Maybe”

“Do you want some water, I’ve got a bottle in the car”

“Yes please”

“Here you go, drink that. I was worried about you, one minute you were standing, just staring, then you collapsed.

“Thanks. The broken fence……….it bothers me”

“Don’t worry love, I’m sure they’ll mend it soon”

“I don’t want it mended. It reminds me”

“Of what?”

“Me……. and my husband”

“I’m sorry love I don’t quite follow”

“This is where he died. Now I am broken……..”

Lisa

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  16 comments for “99 Word Prompt

  1. July 13, 2018 at 1:50 pm

    Heartfelt and deep!❤

    Liked by 1 person

  2. July 13, 2018 at 2:05 pm

    ……….you did a very good job but it is so sad.

    Liked by 1 person

    • July 13, 2018 at 2:38 pm

      I know, sorry, it’s a bit like that at the moment x

      Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 4:08 pm

        Oh no, don’t be sorry………I just could feel your heart breaking………

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 4:32 pm

        It did that a long time ago but I’m trying to mend it 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 5:00 pm

        I have prayed for your heart to mend………and still be able to keep the beautiful memories alive in your soul………..

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 5:34 pm

        Thank you Wendi that really means a lot to me ❤️

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 5:35 pm

        truly my pleasure!

        Liked by 1 person

    • July 13, 2018 at 5:37 pm

      So pleased 😊 Did you enjoy the challenge?

      Like

      • July 13, 2018 at 5:38 pm

        Yes I did enjoy!! 😊
        Thank you for reading my post!

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 5:38 pm

        Ah that’s great 😃 you’re welcome, I enjoyed it!

        Liked by 1 person

      • July 13, 2018 at 5:59 pm

        Thanks a lot again! 😊

        It would be very kind if you could please share or repost any one of posts which you felt was nice? Not necessary, just a request! 😊

        Thank you!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. September 5, 2018 at 8:38 pm

    Superb, but so sad!

    Liked by 1 person

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